A few weeks ago we spoke to novelist Laurel Dewey about her approach to creating the lead character of her acclaimed suspense novel, Protector. That interview got us thinking about the bigger picture: How did Laurel develop her can't-put-it-down, page-turning story? We discovered that Laurel trained as a screenwriter -- and had applied techniques for writing for the silver screen to writing her novel. We asked Laurel to tell us about that, and she graciously shared this detailed -- and invaluable -- conversation with us:
VT: How does screenwriting relate to writing a novel?
Laurel: When I studied screenwriting at the California State University at Northridge, I had incredible professors who wrote Hollywood movies and television docudramas from the 1950's to 1960's. Back then screenwriters were schooled in the narrative of great fiction writing. They had a real understanding of how to tell a story. It was a different reference point than most of today's screenwriters, who are schooled in the conventions of television.
I never in my wildest dreams thought I'd be writing novels. My goal was to be a screenwriter. But I've been able to successfully put to work the screenwriting techniques my great professors taught me to writing novels. To explain them, though, I'm going to have to use the dreaded "F" word.
VT: The "F" word?
Laurel: Yes, "Formula." Formula definitely plays into what I'm going to talk about. But this formula works. It might sound like "writing by the numbers" but it's not. It's about "charting a novel" to help the writer make sure the story keeps moving and the reader stays interested.
This is not cookie cutter. In essence, it becomes the vessel into which you pour your creativity. It becomes the framework for your story. People often say they read novels that just keep going on and on and on, there's no point. Well using this technique, which I adapted from screenwriting, you can avoid that.
VT: How does it work?
Laurel: Just like with a screenplay, you break your book down into Act One, Act Two, and Act Three. This creates clear sections for containing the character development and the story arc.
VT: Sounds like you're creating a system to organize your story.
Laurel: Look at any really good classic story, whether it's a novel, a theatre play or a screenplay, and you will see this system in place. Writers who understand how to tell a story might unconsciously utilize the formula. Writers who are struggling with organizing the story peaks and so on can avoid all that by adapting this system to their novel.
When you read a novel that just goes on and on and on and on, then there's no, what I call, "spike points." My approach solves this.
First of all, you have to break Act One, Act Two, and Act Three into percentages. The rule I came up with is 25/55/20. That means, 25% of the story is Act One, 55% of your book is Act Two, and the final 20 % is Act Three. This may be a little off here and there - it's not an exact formula -- but I've found the "25/55/20 rule" really helps me create a strong box to hold my story.
If you use a 400-page manuscript as an example, applying the 25/55/20 rule would mean 100 pages for Act One. One hundred pages is your "magic number," by the way.
VT: Magic number?
Laurel: The first 100 pages are critical since most publishers judge a book on those pages. If you don't grab them within those first 100 pages, they are not going to want to read the rest of the book.
In a 400-page manuscript, Act Two would be 220 pages, and Act Three would come to about 80 pages. I have found that this approach really does work. If your novel's Act Three is around 80 to 90 pages long, you can really kick it into gear and get the reader going, "yeah, yeah" -- and take them on a ride to the end of the book.
There's wiggle room here, give or take 10 or 15 pages either side, but you don't want to go past these marks because it really does make a difference in how people are going to react to your book.
VT: What's next?
Laurel: Okay, Act One must establish your story. You MUST have a person with a problem. That's Number One. I learned this from screenwriting. If you don't have a character with a problem to solve you don't have a story. You establish the main character or the characters in the first ten pages if possible. Look at books that you really like and you'll see that they do this. They establish the main character and they establish that character's problems. It may not be the main problem of the book, it may not be the main focus of the book, but you've got to introduce what that character is trying to solve.
As for the protagonist's central problem, you have to establish that or at least introduce the problem in some way in the first 25 pages of the manuscript. If you're not introducing what this book's about in the first 25 pages, why are you writing it? And whatever this problem is, it HAS to be resolved by the end of the story.
You should outline your story so the main character must have either other characters and/or situations -- preferably both -- that complicate solving their problem. Without the hills to climb, your story will be flat and pointless. Challenges create intrigue and demonstrate the cleverness and/or determination of the protagonist.
Act One establishes the main character, their problem, and creates the obstacles. It lays the groundwork for the entire book. You have to end Act One with a springboard into Act Two because you need to catapult the reader from the section that establishes your story into the meat of the book. The meat is Act Two.
VT: What's the springboard?
Laurel: The springboard is not the major obstacle but a "wow moment" -- a twist or complication or something that propels the main character and the reader into solving the issue at hand. This brings you into Act Two, the core of your story, where everything important takes place. Act Two is where you delve deeper into the main character, creating obstacle after obstacle for them to overcome. You peel away the proverbial onion layer by layer until you hit the center, which is the "sting" or the end of Act Two. You start Act Two at around 40 mph, but you want to end it at 70 mph.
VT: Can you explain "the sting?"
Laurel: It's the "Oh My God moment." It's the guy hanging, literally, off a cliff. It's the character in jeopardy. It's the make or break moment that carries you into Act Three -- and that Act starts at 70 mph. You MUST keep that momentum going. You want to keep those pages turning and turning because what happens -- as we all know from novels we've read -- is the story often falls apart in the last 80 pages. How many times have you heard this: "I loved the book but the writer didn't know how to end it." Well, that's because the book was poorly conceived and poorly outlined. But if you chart your novel, this won't happen -- and it won't take away from your creativity. You still have to write creatively. You still have to know what you're doing as a writer.
VT: It boils down to a good story in the end.
Laurel: Right. Charting your novel works and what's great about it is that once you have this vessel, as I like to call it, then you have the freedom to create. You pour your structured creativity into that vessel.
“The remarkable thing about Protector is the underlying message that even those with the most deep-seated issues, those who seem terminally flawed, can rise above their problems to accomplish things no one thought possible, least of all themselves. Protector is a fast-paced thriller that is an absolute must read for anyone who loves suspense. (It) will keep you on the edge of your seat until the last moment.”
Web Weekly
“As a reviewer who is accustomed to reading the big, bold and commercialized offerings, it always comes as an amazing and sweet delight to run across a new author who can knock these bad boys/girls off the shelves. Dewey does this and more…(She) offers up a tale of a connection between woman and child that will break your heart, a mystery that will challenge your intellect, and the promise of redemption that will remind you to hope. A beautiful and deeply satisfying novel…”
New Mystery Reader Magazine
“This is a first-rate suspense novel. Laurel Dewey is a fresh, exciting voice with a new perspective on the genre and a three-dimensional heroine who is flawed, infuriating, and utterly affecting. Protector is one of the most exciting and moving novels I’ve read in years.”
— Lou Aronica
The Fiction Studio
"The plot is quick and brutal, the characters deep and well-developed. Protector is a must read book for suspense lovers everywhere. Laurel Dewey has crafted a story both touching and riveting."
- Simegen.com (five stars)
"Laurel Dewey makes an impressive debut with Protector, a gripping thriller that goes far beyond the requirements of the suspense/crime genre to provide penetrating psychological insight into the human condition. She combines her riveting tale with emotionally probing psychological analysis that resonates in the reader long after the case is solved. Dewey’s heroine, Detective Jane Perry, is as real as a fictional character can get. Action filled, spell-binding and even spine-tingling, the plot will seize and hold the attention of any thrill seeker. Dewey’s work is about how to help us all to let go of whatever towrope we’re hanging onto."
- Janet Hamilton
Myshelf.com Reviews
"Laurel Dewey has crafted a memorable tale full of mystery and emotion in this debut novel...(She) spins a fantastic suspense yarn, but this story is driven by the relationship of (the main characters). Protector will tug at your heartstrings as Dewey reminds us of the importance of family and relationships. This is an outstanding beginning to what is sure to be a successful writing career for Laurel Dewey."
Jake Chism
Armchair Interviews
"Laurel Dewey writes a hard-edged thriller with plenty of mystery and intrigue...Dewey presents a rough-around-the-edges lead character with real problems and emotional dysfunctions and deftly takes us along on the journey as Jane Perry finds her inner strength, despite her own horrific childhood, to help another child...Ultimately, it's a story of a woman coming face to face with her own deepest fears, and the ride is a wild one."
Curled Up With A Good Book
“I had to keep reading. There are so many mysteries that seemed to be tangled into one. Anyone who likes a page-turning mystery will love PROTECTOR.”
Readerviews.com
“Dewey is a talented writer who shows a flair for creating edgy crime fiction with a strong psychological component and an interesting mystical dimension. (She) has discovered a worthy (story) in Protector, a crime novel featuring an interesting supernatural twist that sets it apart from the traditional mystery.”
TCM Reviews
“Laurel Dewey's debut mystery novel, PROTECTOR, is an exciting, intriguing, and sometimes frightening thriller. Though the mystery in PROTECTOR is about the investigation of the gruesome murders of five people who appear to be innocent victims and the intense search for the criminals responsible, the heart of the novel concerns Detective Jane Perry and nine year old Emily Lawrence, the child she has sworn to protect. It is the relationship between Jane and Emily that makes PROTECTOR a great novel and a fabulous mystery.”
Mysterious Reviews
“Laurel Dewey's debut novel, Protector, is an exciting crime thriller that has a hint of the sixth sense. (It) is surprisingly realistic in depicting the darkness of the human psyche. Dewey captures the flawed personalities of the characters really well, especially that of the heroine, Detective Jane Perry. (She) was one of the most memorable characters I've read about in a long time. (Protector) is an excellent tale of suspense that intensifies…I enjoyed the novel immensely…”
Blog Critics
“A nicely drawn thriller with a few twists of the paranormal to keep the plot interesting…this is a fast-paced journey into the private hell of an abused child grown into adulthood.”
Monsters and Critics
"Protector is a roller coaster ride of emotion, flowing from the extremes of hard-edged police work to abuse to motherhood and loss?(It) is a gritty crime drama to the core. This is definitely one of those novels that is made for the big screen."
Front Street Reviews
"Hang on for a fast-paced thriller that will grip you first page to last! PROTECTOR is an extremely fast-paced, page-turning, jaw-clenching story. The reader is pulled into living the story with the characters. If you like suspenseful thrillers, you will love this one."
Fresh Fiction
“Laurel Dewey has created a realistic heroine in Jane Perry. PROTECTOR is quite fast-paced, and the climax rushes at the reader at full tilt. Readers of suspense novels will enjoy this author, and this heroine.”
Roundtable Reviews
“Dewey writes with a raw intensity that literally jumps off the pages and draws the reader in from start to finish. PROTECTOR is a roller coaster ride of startling twists and shocking turns that you just won’t see coming. Unique, mystic, and almost exhausting, PROTECTOR will have you glued to its pages from beginning to end.”
Vicki Landes, author of “Europe for the Senses – A Photographic Journal”
“Laurel Dewey has crafted a well-told story with totally believable characters. You may even find yourself getting more involved with this story more than others of this type. Look for this one and put Laurel Dewey on your “must read” for her future offerings.”
Baryon Reviews, #106
“Protector totally blew me away. Totally and completely…I ended the book in tears, and wanting to be able to read more about Jane Perry immediately so I sure hope this is going to be a series.”
Kaye Barley, DorothyL Reviews
“Protector takes the traditional crime drama and blends it with the metaphysical to become an intensifying debut novel. (This) is a crime thriller that is both powerful and emotional…”
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